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Do you know what an “elevator pitch” is? Don’t worry if you don’t, I’ve just become familiar with it myself over the past few months.

Basically, an “elevator pitch” is a quick & simple pitch of an idea or a product done within the time span of an elevator ride. Typically, an elevator ride in New York – a city that never sleeps –takes between 30 and 90 seconds. That’s it. In less than 2 minutes, you’re expected to deliver an ‘elevator pitch” that can make or break your business plan.

I have never been comfortable with selling someone a product or an idea – except for a story pitch. Back in the days when I was a television news journalist, I was totally comfortable with pitching a story idea about an issue, a problem, or a person. I was entirely passionate about producing a short story in a 30 second voice-over, or a minute-long package complete with interviews, narration and stand-up. But now that I’m a novice entrepreneur, I find it very challenging to deliver this “elevator pitch,” especially when you literally have to do it while waiting for the elevator inside your own apartment building!

True story.

Just the other day, I was walking into my building after a grocery run to Trader Joe’s.  My arms and elbows were full of bags of milk and vegetables when I ran into one of my favorite neighbors on my floor – someone I haven’t seen for months. He’s a young Korean-American father who had lost his finance job during the economic downturn a few years ago. He has since been taking care of his 5-year old son Jonathan while developing his own business connections with a private equity firm.

As soon as he saw me, he bellowed out – “What are you up to?” “What are you doing these days?” John remembered I’d gone back to school.

“Hi John, I’m back in the city now, I’ve formed my own company, it’s time to try something different.” I replied with a smile.

Even before I finished talking, his little 5 year-old and mother-in-law – also waiting for the elevator in the lobby, stepped in. His mother-in-law asked me something totally different  –

“You’re back in New York? That’s great! Do you teach piano? Can you teach little Jonathan piano?”

“Oh, that’s so sweet of you to ask.” I chuckled. “You must have heard my loud piano practice every morning. She nodded with a big smile.

“But I was just having fun, I am not qualified to teach.”

“Really? You don’t teach piano?” she responded with skepticism, and a touch of disappointment.

At that moment, three elevator doors opened at about the same time. As a dozen residents suddenly came out of nowhere and started rushing to get inside the elevators, my neighbor John pressed on –

“So, what kind of company is it, Mable?”

I responded while keeping one eye on the elevator crowd -“It’s a media company – a digital platform with a blog and weekly podcast targeting young people from China, and inside China. These are young people with big dreams and ideas. They want to explore a different world, they want to succeed and … ”

As I was about to continue, all the elevator doors are about to close and John caught one in the nick of time –

“Let’s get in and talk, Mable.”

“Sounds great…” I managed to squeeze inside with my groceries, and John got his son and in-law in standing right next to me.

“China is sending lot of young people to America, no doubt. How much money do you need? Are you raising money?“ John asked.

“I’m not big at all, but I do have more than 15 on my team all over the world. I do need to raise money.

“How much?” John looked me in the eye.

“One million for the first 2 years – ideally.” Somehow, I felt comfortable announcing that dream figure. That was the first time I’d ever articulated my fund-raising goal, inside an elevator!

John froze for a minute, then we’re all getting out of the elevator – it was our floor.

“We should talk more.” John and I exchanged cards.

“Sure” – I smiled back and noticed little Jonathan and his grandma beaming with smiling eyes – “I know a great piano teacher in Chinatown – she’s Chinese specialized in teaching little children,” I told grandma.

“Thank you,” my neighbor John uttered. “Let’s talk more later, you should just drop by our home and talk anytime.”

I grinned and thanked him.

At that moment, it dawned on me that I’d just delivered a real elevator pitch!  But it didn’t feel difficult or daunting. It wasn’t hard because I felt like I was just connecting with neighbors. Our lives crossed as we were waiting for the elevator. Our conversations about what’s on our mind drew us closer as neighbors, as friends, and made us feel suddenly connected – almost like family. That moment was enough for me to feel happy – regardless of whether or not my elevator pitch was a million dollar success.

你知道什么是 “电梯简报“吗?如果不知道的话, 不用担心, 我也是这一两个月才知道它的意思.

基本上, “电梯简报”是在电梯一个简短且简单的简报. 这个简报可以在搭电梯短暂的时间内将一个想法或商品介绍完. 正常来说, 在纽约这个永不睡觉的城市里, 搭电梯大概会花30到90秒. 就这样, 在不到两分钟内, 你就需要完成这个“电梯简报”. 这个简报攸关你商业计划的全部. 我一直对推销商品或想法感到不舒服,除非是要我用故事来推销. 之前我是电视新闻记者. 针对一个议题, 问题或是一个人, 我对用故事作简报的方式感到非常舒服. 我对30秒用故事作简报, 或是一分钟长的访问, 叙述故事或即席非常热忱. 但现在我是一个刚上路的创业家,,我觉得这种“电梯简报”非常有挑战性, 特别是你等自己家里的电梯时, 也要做这种“电梯简报”.

真实故事.

某一天, 我在Trader Joe’s买完杂货之后走进我的大厦. 手上都是装着牛奶和蔬菜袋子的我, 看到我最喜欢的邻居. 我已经好几个月没看到他了. 他是位年轻韩裔美国爸爸. 他在几年前经济萧条时丧失了他财经业的工作. 自从丧失工作之后, 他便开始照顾他五岁的儿子, Jonathan并同时发展他在“私人股权投资”这行业里的关系.

他一看到我, 他就叫到“你在做什么?”“你最近在做什么呢?” John记得我回学校上课.

“嗨John, 我又回到城市里了, 我组织了我自己的公司, 也该是换事情做的时候了.” 我笑笑地回答.

在我还没讲完话之前, 他的小孩跟岳母, 刚好也在大厅等电梯, 也走进来了. 他的岳母问了我完全不一样的问题. “你回来纽约了?太好了!你教钢琴吗?你可以教Jonathan钢琴吗?“

“你能这样问真是太好了“我笑道. “你一定是听到我早上大声练习钢琴声音吧”她点点头并且微笑.

“那只是好玩的, 我不够资格教书.”

“真的吗?你不教钢琴?“她有点怀疑并且失望的回答

那一刻, 三个电梯门大概在同一时间打开. 大约十多个居民突然出现然后往电梯门涌去. 我的邻居John 按开门键.

”所以, 是哪一种公司呢? Mable?”

我眼睛看着电梯人群然后回答道“是一家媒体公司- 一个有部落格和每周podcast的数位平台. 我们把中国来的年轻人和中国当地的年轻人当成我们的目标. 这些年轻人有很多梦想和想法. 他们想要探索一个不同的世界, 他们想要成功和..”

当我正要继续时, 所有电梯门开始关上, John在最后一刻上了电梯.

“进来讲话吧, Mable.”

“太好了.”我试图拿着我买的杂货挤进电梯. John 让他的儿子跟岳母站在我旁边.

“毋庸置疑的, 中国现在试图送很多年轻人到美国. 你觉得你需要多少钱. 你在筹钱吗?“ John 问到.

“现在我们还很小. 但是我的团队在世界各地有十五个人. 我是需要筹钱的.”

看着我, John说, “多少?“

“理想状况下前两年要一百万.” 不知如何, 讲我理想中的数据让我觉得很自然. 这是我第一次将我募款的目标讲出来, 而且还是在一个电梯里说的呢!

John 有一分钟都没有动静, 然后我们到了四楼便准备要出电梯

“我们可以再多谈一些”John跟我交换名片

“当然“ 我对他微笑并注意到小Jonathan和他的祖母眼里含笑地对我微笑.

“谢谢“我的邻居John 说. 我们晚点再聊, 你随时都可以来我家聊天.”

我微笑并且谢谢他

那一刻, 我意识到到我完成了一个电梯简报!但是没有很困难​​或可怕. 因为我只是在跟我的邻居沟通, 所以感觉上没有很难. 我们人生因为等电梯而有了交集. 以邻居和以朋友的角度来看, 我们讨论我们心事时让我们更靠近了对方. 而且让我们突然之间有了交集-几乎像家人一样. 那一瞬间就已经足够让我快乐了- 不管我的电梯间报是不是一个价值一百万的大成功!